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Wednesday, May 16, 2018
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Friday, May 11, 2018
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Wednesday, May 9, 2018
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Monday, May 7, 2018
Chapter 4 - Part 4
“I’ll be fine,” she knew that he was worried. Not about the job
at hand, it was something else, “With any luck we will have some
good leads in a week and we’ll finish early. Time is everything in this
mission and getting in will be easier for me than it will be for you.”
Jan watched as he turned away and looked out the window. He
watched the lazy life-style that they had grown accustomed to and
the people, carrying their small bags of groceries, going by. A few
school kids in their uniforms were on their way home, and he
watched them laugh and joke with each other. Jan was picking up on
Hidden Promises 45
his thoughts and was unsure of what she was reading. It seemed to
her that he had no doubts that he could easily get into the
underworld. For a moment, Jan wondered just how many times he
had done this before. Ward interrupted her thoughts, “Don’t get too
many ideas, okay. Eddy and I have a few friends,” the last word was emphasized.
Unsure of who thought of it first, they suddenly both looked at the ring on her hand. Even though they both wore the wedding bands on their right hands, not the left, they also knew that Jan couldn’t leave hers on. Jan looked back at Ward, and in an instant knew just what she wanted to do. Carefully she removed the bracelet from her arm and the necklace from around her neck. It was a matched set that Ward had picked out for her. The bracelet Ward had given her on their wedding day, and except for one really bad time in her life she had never had it off her wrist. The necklace, that was an anniversary present, but it had ended up as a late present because of her and the PED department. Ward watched her hook the two together with great care. She then carefully removed the wedding band from her finger and threaded the chain through the ring. Placing her arms and the chain around his neck, she hooked the chains together again at the back of his neck, and slid the ring inside his shirt gently pressing it to his chest. She felt the warmth of his chest under her hand, and the warmth of his breath on her cheek. The beating of his heart quickened. Ward felt her warmth from the ring against his skin and he moved closer to kiss her, softly at first, and then they let the kiss deepen and their minds mingled making the most out of the last minutes they would have together for awhile. It was only seconds before he pulled slightly away from her lips knowing their time had come to an end.
“Take care, Babs,” was all he could whisper in her ear before she slowly pulled away and got out of the car. Jan started to walk over to the bus depot, stopped and then started again.
She hated ‘Good-byes,’ so she had always chosen not to say any, ever. In all the time she had known Ward, she had never once said good-bye to him, not even on their first unofficial date. At first it had been just a bad habit of hers, and then after joining the PED she intentionally never said good-bye to anyone. She never even said good-bye to Rob, her old partner, when she knew it was most likely the last time she would ever see him. Jan thought that goodbye’s were for those who were trying to close doors, and hide behind them. She preferred to leave her doors open, just in case. Or was it that she just never had the nerve to say the word? The only time she had ever said goodbye to anyone was to another agent. On the next job he went out on, he was killed. Now was not the time for her to struggle with those issues. Right now, not saying the dreaded ‘good- bye’ word to Ward was more of a superstition, a habit she didn’t intend to break. If they never said it, they would have to be back together, and if not, then there would probably be only one of them left with regrets. With any luck it wouldn’t be her.
Unsure of who thought of it first, they suddenly both looked at the ring on her hand. Even though they both wore the wedding bands on their right hands, not the left, they also knew that Jan couldn’t leave hers on. Jan looked back at Ward, and in an instant knew just what she wanted to do. Carefully she removed the bracelet from her arm and the necklace from around her neck. It was a matched set that Ward had picked out for her. The bracelet Ward had given her on their wedding day, and except for one really bad time in her life she had never had it off her wrist. The necklace, that was an anniversary present, but it had ended up as a late present because of her and the PED department. Ward watched her hook the two together with great care. She then carefully removed the wedding band from her finger and threaded the chain through the ring. Placing her arms and the chain around his neck, she hooked the chains together again at the back of his neck, and slid the ring inside his shirt gently pressing it to his chest. She felt the warmth of his chest under her hand, and the warmth of his breath on her cheek. The beating of his heart quickened. Ward felt her warmth from the ring against his skin and he moved closer to kiss her, softly at first, and then they let the kiss deepen and their minds mingled making the most out of the last minutes they would have together for awhile. It was only seconds before he pulled slightly away from her lips knowing their time had come to an end.
“Take care, Babs,” was all he could whisper in her ear before she slowly pulled away and got out of the car. Jan started to walk over to the bus depot, stopped and then started again.
She hated ‘Good-byes,’ so she had always chosen not to say any, ever. In all the time she had known Ward, she had never once said good-bye to him, not even on their first unofficial date. At first it had been just a bad habit of hers, and then after joining the PED she intentionally never said good-bye to anyone. She never even said good-bye to Rob, her old partner, when she knew it was most likely the last time she would ever see him. Jan thought that goodbye’s were for those who were trying to close doors, and hide behind them. She preferred to leave her doors open, just in case. Or was it that she just never had the nerve to say the word? The only time she had ever said goodbye to anyone was to another agent. On the next job he went out on, he was killed. Now was not the time for her to struggle with those issues. Right now, not saying the dreaded ‘good- bye’ word to Ward was more of a superstition, a habit she didn’t intend to break. If they never said it, they would have to be back together, and if not, then there would probably be only one of them left with regrets. With any luck it wouldn’t be her.
Even for Jan it was a silly superstition, but lots of silly things
keep people going through life, and this was only one of hers. Don’t
step on a crack, don’t walk under ladders, don’t break a mirror or it
will be seven years bad luck, none of these she believed in. She
smiled inside at the times she had broken a mirror and had never
once associated it with bad luck. Most of the time luck was what you
made it. Sometimes you have it, sometimes you don’t. She began to
read the people around her, truly leaving herself behind now. This
would be a necessity, throughout the entire job, to survive.
The engine of the Explorer started up. She heard the
transmission engage, and didn’t stop. The sound was present for
only a second. Jan turned, just so slightly, as Ward drove away. Jan
watched Ward from the corner of her eye. Ward never once turned
back to look at her. This was his superstition. He silently smiled at
her in his thoughts. She held onto it as long as she could, and then
slowly lost her connection with him. She stared at the road filled with
cars, the smoke, the dirt, and the commotion, not seeing any of it. It
was time to start the game, and to play for keeps. Jan turned back
toward the benches made of old half painted wood, and she picked
up on the thoughts of those around her. Slowly, she walked closer
and closer to the benches leaving the persona of Jan behind her.
With each step that she took, anyone that could see inside her head
would know that she had become Isabel.

Friday, May 4, 2018
Chapter 4 - Part 3
She had taken the time to hide the other items in both the straps and in the lining of the bag that she was carrying. They would not be things easily detected, found, or if found, that anyone would care about. In one part she had put her favorite item, a small package of rat poison. It had gotten her out of quite a few fixes in the past, easy to hide, easy to use, and easily replaced. Inside the bag she had included her favorite lock pick that she had once loaned Ward. When Ward had returned it to her, she had placed it in her apartment and left it there. On her last assignment she was almost sure she had lost it forever, but somehow, Ward had gotten it for her. To anyone else it would look like an old pen, but it had been a lifesaver for her many times, and a keepsake given to her by an old, and dear friend. Jan had taken the time last night to haphazardly sew the bag with one package of dental floss, twenty-five feet long, which only added to the authentic look of the bag as well as adding to her supply of tools that she may need. She had been careful not to cut the floss, as she never knew just how long of a piece she might need. After glancing at the bag, Jan gave Ward a quick affirmative nod to let him know she was ready. Before he put the car back into drive, Ward leaned over and let his finger gently trace her face and then cup her chin with his hand. His hand rested there for only a few moments before his hand moved farther down her body and at the same time he kissed her with a passion that she could feel deep inside both her mind and her body. Then, pulling away from her, he put the Explorer back into gear and drove back onto the road without a word. The transformation between lovers into working partners was just getting started.
Ward and Jan pulled into the small town of Hermosillo early in the afternoon. Hermosillo was where they had decided that Jan should catch the bus up to Nogales, the border town in which she would try and hire the right coyote to take her across. Being dropped off in Hermosillo would cause less suspicion than if he dropped her off in the border town itself. This way she looked as if she was on her own, and alone. It made her a much better target. It had been a long ride from the cool Pacific coast of the Baja to the warm dry mainland of Mexico, but a necessary trip that they both hoped would prove profitable.
As they pulled up to the small, old and dirty building that served as the bus stop, ticket booth, and information desk, she turned to look at Ward. His thoughts were open to her. She could tell that there was a plurality in his thoughts. This was not a new feeling. The one problem all mind readers faced was that people could, and often did, think of many things at once. It wasn’t something that was planned, but weeding through it was the skill, not reading the thoughts as some people presumed. He was beginning to prepare himself for his transformation into his legend, character, as well. Ward was both exhilarated and worried about what was going to transpire and it wasn’t something that Jan was surprised to read from him, she had the same feelings. The idea of working again was intoxicating to her in one way, but on the other hand it would mean that the person she most loved and trusted would be in danger. She had the same plurality going on in her head. His thoughts were also busy going through his plans for the rest of the day, wondering if he would make the small, informal border crossing he used before the officer he had become the most friendly with went off duty. They sat stopped for a few minutes watching the people around them before Jan got out of the Explorer. Leaving the personality of Jan behind, and adopting the role of Isabel completely, she walked the ten feet up to what was left of the old iron bars of the ticket window. Ward watched as she talked to the man on the other side of the barred and glassless window. Ward listened in to both Jan’s and the attendants thoughts, and quickly knew that all was going well. The guy on the other side of the window had already decided that she was in a business type relationship with Ward, the oldest business most likely by his thoughts, and now she needed to get back to where she worked out of most of the time.
Jan’s thoughts were predictable, focused on duty. She was amused by the attendant’s thoughts, but careful not to let on. She was also glad that they had decided on this as the drop off place rather than the border town where they would have drawn even more attention, and suspicion. After she completed the transactions for the ticket, she then placed it all in her bag.
Jan turned and returned to the Explorer. Getting into the passenger side of the vehicle she wore the little smile on her face that Ward knew so well. It was the smile of satisfaction of being on a job. What was on her thoughts she didn’t say out loud, but she did share them with Ward and found out that he had picked up on the entire conversation she had had at the ticket window. She could feel the eyes of the man who had sold her the tickets on her, so she leaned over to Ward and French kissed him. Not wanting to waste the moment Ward returned the kiss, and after a couple of minutes they pulled away. They stared at each other lost in the moment. It only took a couple of minutes before Jan broke the silence, her voice sounding just a bit out of breath.
“The bus will be here in twenty minutes,” she didn’t finish the thought out loud, she didn’t need too. Jan leaned back on the seat, mentally preparing to step out of the Explorer and into the world of Isabel until the job was complete. Ward turned to look at her and what he saw never ceased to amaze him. They had learned how to blend into any situation, or any environment, when they had been trained, but Jan had always had a special knack for it, and he loved to watch her prepare for her role in the moments before she left. He didn’t know if it was her college studies that had made her so good at this, or if it was just a talent she had. What he saw before him was not the Jan he knew. She was there, but buried deep inside, keeping her feelings safe from others, and only barely accessible to him. Of all those people that could and would see her, all would truly believe she was a native of Mexico. She looked the part, her clothes, her hair tied back into a ponytail, and although she would be considered a light skin Mexican of mostly Spanish decent, he knew that when she got out of the car, she would put on the rest of the act for all to see. There would be no question if she was authentic or not by anyone outside of this vehicle. By reading the minds of those around her, she could change her actions, mannerisms, and expressions all in a split second to fit with the area or to adjust the character as needed. She could tweak her role to fit anything she would need. That was one of the many reasons why mind readers were so valued, and a top-secret commodity within the government. The government had put a lot of training into each of them and wanted to reap the benefits of it. With the training each reader had received and continued to get, they could work with any military or clandestine service that had access and knowledge of their department, maybe not the skills, but the department. That’s one reason they were not happy to have two leave the fold. The numbers of readers weren’t that great to begin with, and the years of training a costly investment.

Wednesday, May 2, 2018
Chapter 4 - Part 2
“I don’t plan on getting caught, and with any luck, the name
I’m using will give me just enough cover if I do. Most of the time the
border patrol just sends you back without getting your prints
completely processed first, or at all. Not a good policy, but with the
amount of traffic that crosses the border here, and is caught, it is
understandable,” the conversation was over as quick as it had begun,
and they drove on in silence. Jan’s mind wandered back to the
arrangements they had made if she were to get caught. She was
going to use the name Isabel Garcia Lopez. If there were any
problems, the phone number she would give them would be Manuel’s
cell phone, in Mexico, or a phony address in Hermosillo. Ward
arranged this when Manuel had dropped off the clothes, and then
later shared it with Jan. He was to pose as her brother if she called.
Most importantly, he was not to let Mama Garcia know what was
happening, they didn’t want to worry her anymore than necessary.
Manuel would be good cover, and would come to meet the bus if
necessary. Ward left a vehicle available for him to use for just such
an event. Ward and Jan tried hard not to involve the Garcias at all if
possible, but sometimes they would use Manuel as back up.
The drive through what could only be described as a dusty, sandy, low scrub desert was fairly boring if one was not in love with the desert. They didn’t talk for hours and barely shared their thoughts. Jan watched the scenery as they traveled down the nearly empty roads through the countryside. As they passed through the small towns she would watch the locals walk along the streets and glance unnoticeably at the Explorer. She drifted in and out of a restless sleep, and when it was about noon they stopped to grab a couple of sodas and a taco with everything, from a vendor on the corner. The place looked as if it was well kept even though the wood that held the stand together was well worn from the years of weathering, and the paint was almost nonexistent from sun and wind. There seemed to be a lot of people enjoying the food and just as many waiting to be served. They finished eating quickly and got back into the Explorer. As they got back in, Jan and Ward started a small conversation that had nothing to do with the job they were about to embark on. It was just simply small talk. The small talk seemed to loosen up their minds as well as their muscles. As they talked about nothing of importance, the tension seemed to drift off on the wind that passed through the vehicle. Most of the drive was done, but they needed to get to Hermosillo before the last bus left for Nogales. Jan had printed out the schedule yesterday to make sure they didn’t miss it. One more day could mean that they would lose a lead. It could also mean that there would be more people preyed upon and lost. On this job, time was everything. They also knew that the full moon was tonight, and for the next couple of days crossings would be favorable, and frequent.
The drive through what could only be described as a dusty, sandy, low scrub desert was fairly boring if one was not in love with the desert. They didn’t talk for hours and barely shared their thoughts. Jan watched the scenery as they traveled down the nearly empty roads through the countryside. As they passed through the small towns she would watch the locals walk along the streets and glance unnoticeably at the Explorer. She drifted in and out of a restless sleep, and when it was about noon they stopped to grab a couple of sodas and a taco with everything, from a vendor on the corner. The place looked as if it was well kept even though the wood that held the stand together was well worn from the years of weathering, and the paint was almost nonexistent from sun and wind. There seemed to be a lot of people enjoying the food and just as many waiting to be served. They finished eating quickly and got back into the Explorer. As they got back in, Jan and Ward started a small conversation that had nothing to do with the job they were about to embark on. It was just simply small talk. The small talk seemed to loosen up their minds as well as their muscles. As they talked about nothing of importance, the tension seemed to drift off on the wind that passed through the vehicle. Most of the drive was done, but they needed to get to Hermosillo before the last bus left for Nogales. Jan had printed out the schedule yesterday to make sure they didn’t miss it. One more day could mean that they would lose a lead. It could also mean that there would be more people preyed upon and lost. On this job, time was everything. They also knew that the full moon was tonight, and for the next couple of days crossings would be favorable, and frequent.
Ward drove for another hour and a half. He then pulled over
to the side of the road on a dusty and sandy turnaround that barely
existed. Off to the side there were the remains of a table and what
might have been a trash container at one time or another. The
Explorer jostled to a stop and he turned to look at Jan. They were
just outside of Hermosillo. Ward wanted to ask Jan if she had
everything she needed, but he already knew she did. Words would
not serve his purpose right now. Instead he just stared at her and
she returned his strong gaze with one that was equally as strong.
Knowing what he was thinking without even reading his thoughts, she
allowed her thoughts mix with his to let him know that she was feeling
the same. To ease the tension and create a diversion, in her
thoughts she went over what she had in her bag, and going over the
premise of the legend, or persona she was about to adopt.

Sunday, April 29, 2018
Chapter 4 - Part 1
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Jan had gotten dressed long before the sun had come up and
Ward had packed the Explorer quickly as neither one needed very
much, just the one packed bag each. Ward needed to get across the
border before changing his identity. He had packed a couple items
he would need for his role change. It fit into a small bag, no bigger
than the small bag that they had always carried for the jobs they used
to work on. The idea of the small bag had been both a habit and a
necessity when working with the department. It would be less to lose
on an assignment if it were left behind, expendable. Important items
needed to be kept on the body, or in relative safety, and anything that
was needed for daily routines usually could be gotten wherever a
person was. It also made an agent more portable getting through
airports and across borders, as well as quick.
Jan walked over to the window in the bedroom that overlooked the ocean and opened the curtain to see the last rays from the moon bounce off the ocean in the distance. Looking out to the deepest depths of the ocean she wondered where the dolphins were at this moment. Closing her eyes she made a silent wish, a prayer that they would both return here safely and quickly. Not something she normally did, but now was as good a time as any to start a new superstition. Ward walked out of the room without saying anything. Jan turned and followed Ward out the door and out of the apartment.
They got to the top of the stairs, crossed the patio, and out the ancient gates, the Explorer sat waiting. They got in and closed the doors without saying a word, both mentally preparing for the job ahead of them. As they drove away from the relative safety of their hideaway, Ward popped a CD into the player. It was soft and eerie music that seemed to fill every corner of the vehicle. It was the CD Ward played when he needed to reach a level of calm and consciousness that seemed to be beyond his ability at the time. The sound of the Native American flute filled every crevice of the vehicle, calming and soothing their nerves, as it worked its way into their very beings as well. Jan was unsure of what problem he was grappling with; and decided that waiting until he was ready to discuss it with her would be the prudent move. Letting the music again fill every spot in her brain she nonchalantly placed her hand on his leg to reassure him of her presence as they drove. She could feel Ward’s muscles begin to relax in response to her touch, and she could feel some of his tension fall away.
When the first two songs had faded to the back of their
memories and the third was about to begin, Ward turned off the CD
and glanced over to see if Jan was still awake. Jan, without turning
her face toward him, opened her mind to let him know that whatever
the topic may be, she was willing to discuss it with him. At first they
didn’t talk, at least not out loud. He started to slowly share his
thoughts with her, mentally letting his mind wander into hers, and
hers back into his. There were fears. Crossing the border illegally at
any time would be dangerous, but there was an added danger for
both Ward and Jan every time they crossed. They now had to be
careful every time they crossed the borders. Ward had made it
easier to cross with the casual friendship he had achieved with one
group of border patrol officers. His fears for Jan were different.
Crossing illegally left a few more items to chance. They had planned
and emotionally prepared for their identity changes and for the
dangers they would both face, except for one. Jan had half prepared
for it, but the danger still existed and there was no way to make it all
better. Who they were and what they had done in the past had
always been dangerous. The criminal elements were never nice, but
there was now an added group of people actively looking for them,
always looking for them, and it wasn’t only the criminals that they had
to be careful of, it was also the department. This was what was truly
worrying Ward. One slip could cause the entire operation to fail, and their lives to be ruined.
“Don’t get caught crossing the border. If they get your prints I
don’t have to tell you what will happen next. Gregg and the guys will
get to you before immigration can even walk you back to the bus for
Mexico,” his voice a lackluster tone as he referred to the current
department head of the PED, and his previous partner. “He won’t
ever give up, not until he gets both of us now.” Ward would know
better than anyone else what would be in Gregg’s head. Over all the
years that she had known him, he had never shared why they had
split up as partners. It was unusual to request a change, but not
unheard of. Ever since then, though, Gregg had been almost out to
get Ward, catch him on anything he did wrong. He had even tried to
get Jan to lure him back to the department in exchange for her
freedom and future at one time.
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Wednesday, April 11, 2018
Hidden Promises - Chapter 3 - Part 1
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It wasn’t until the next morning that either Ward or Jan got back to the computer. Without any thought, Jan opened Ward’s e-mail account as he finished up in the shower. When the program finally opened, a letter popped up on the screen. There, in front of her, was a note from Eddy.
“Glad to see that you two have decided to join the world again,” as she read down the note she could almost hear Eddy saying it. “Got a bunch of good descriptions, information and even some names. Give me a buzz and I’ll let you know the details.” Jan closed the e-mail before Ward could enter the room and she walked into the kitchen to fix a quick breakfast. This news would be better on a full stomach she decided. Hearing Ward come out of the bedroom, she called him over to eat breakfast before he got a chance to read the new e-mail. Ward sat down at the table and picked up the spoon. When he saw that she had boiled eggs and made toast he knew that something must be up. Jan never did anything more than toast for breakfast, or something that might resemble it, when she made breakfast. Although when he cooked she was always happy to finish off eggs, bacon and any other fixings that might come with it, if he made it for her. He gave her a knowing smile. Letting her stew a moment, he began to eat.
“Eddy e-mailed. Sounds as if he has what we need to get started,” she took a breath and looked at him. “Ward, we’re taking the job,” her voice held an air of confidence. Ward continued to eat and didn’t look her way. “Did you hear me?” she had expected some kind of reaction and when none came she was surprised.
“Yes, and okay,” Jan looked at him confused and Ward finally stopped eating and looked back at her, “I always knew you would want to, you’re just like me, but you had to know that yourself. You had to have the choice. You see it took me a few months away from the job to want to go back and then nothing could stop me. I figured you wouldn’t be any different; just wanted to give you and us, the time first,” he continued with breakfast. “I also had to be sure that’s what you really wanted,” Jan made a face he didn’t see and took a sip of coffee, choosing not to respond to the last comment he made.
“Eddy wants you to buzz him to get the information. Now we just have to plan out the details before starting,” it was routine procedure, and that’s one thing Jan knew would never change. There was a plan, always a plan A and B. The plan was there for safety, for routine and for each other. It was the routine paperwork and research that made all jobs safer.
After breakfast they sat at the table with paper and pencil determining their roles and options for this job. As the plan began to develop, Ward could have told Jan that he wasn’t happy with the risks she would need to take; but the risks on any job like this usually never changed. They had always taken risks and that was one of the many hazards of what they did. It was also what they liked to do, and they had the best training. And after all, she was probably not going to be too pleased with the risk he was going to take either. Both being in the same emotional boat made it easier, as well as more difficult, but they tried only to focus on the job, not each other. Jan realized that she had never asked Ward the most important questions before she had decided to join him on his, and now her crusades. She had only just assumed the answers. Being on the other side herself now, it was time to find out the answers. She had to wonder just how they would get justice for those who had been wronged? Who did he call? Just how did he do all of this?
“What do you do after you find and catch the bad guys?” Jan rested her elbows on the table, folded her hands and rested her chin on them. She tried to look casual. His left eyebrow raised a little as he raised his head to look at her straight in the eye.
“What do you think I do?” he had issued her a challenge. Looking at her sarcastically, he awaited her answer. Jan looked back into the eyes of the man that she thought she knew.
“Well, I would hope you find some way of turning them, or the information, in to the correct authorities,” Jan was beginning to feel a bit uneasy as she tapped into his thoughts, not sure of what she might find there. Knowing that it might not be the answer she would want to find, she stopped and waited.
“I’d like to tell you that every job ends up with the bad guy in jail, but you know differently even from your past experiences with the department,” he let her into his thoughts now, sharing their past experiences, and then just his past jobs after the department. “Most of the time it works out the way everyone would hope. I can get local authorities, or friends to help out. But there are those times when the goal is the most important thing to keep in mind and the bad guys go free.” Jan could feel his pain from those experiences that had not worked out the way he planned. She didn’t miss the clouded thought in the back of his mind that her last assignment in the department had been one of the ones that had caused him pain. Knowing that, she decided to let it go and get out of his thoughts for now. As always, the mission was what was important. Determine the goal and plan the mission; the rest of what happened was, of course, the icing on the cake or the fly in the soup. Some things in their lives had changed though; now they decided the goal and what was important. This case was promising to be as big as some jobs they had worked in the past, not the biggest, but substantial. No one in the official world would take it on yet, not without some more proof or people who could fight for their right to be heard. Ward had watched her face and her thoughts, as all the worlds collided in her head, and the crystallization of who they were now, became clear in her thoughts. Ward smiled as he saw the realization dawn in her mind and in her face that they were the vigilantes, the ones who fought for those who had no one to turn to. They returned to planning out the mission with a renewed sense of vigor.
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Friday, April 6, 2018
Hidden Promises - Chapter 2 - Part 3
Ward had been watching Jan meditate. He often did this from the balcony as she sat on the rocks deep in thought. He found it relaxing just to watch her, and today was no different. He saw her laugh, felt her laugh, and knew that she had made the final leap into the present. She was whole. As he walked back into the apartment and over to the computer he knew that the last thing he ever wanted was to have her in danger. It truly scared him, but that wasn’t the woman he had married two years ago.
He sat down at the computer and started up the links to the departmental computers. He wanted to see if there was any information on coyote activity. He knew that Jan had already done some of this work, but he also knew that double checking information was a necessity for safety. As he sat and waited for the links to connect, he remembered the first time he had seen her.
He was about six years younger. He had just finished an unscheduled overseas assignment and was coming back to the United States. Both Ward and his partner had reentered the country in L.A. on separate planes, and as Phoenix was the closest office decided to go there for a while until all the reports were completed. Over the years he had spent with the PED, he had two partners. His current partner, Gregg, thought that Phoenix would be a good stop. That way they would be able to catch up with some old friends. Gregg would never have guessed what came next.
Walking into the office and over to claim an uncluttered desk was when he caught his first glimpse of her. She was hunched over a desk. It wasn’t as if he was a novice, but something about her was different and he hadn’t even seen her face. He could only see the back of her head and the brown hair loosely tied in a ponytail. It wasn’t reading her mind, he wasn’t even about to try that here, but there was a connection, an attraction, even without reading her.
Ward didn’t know if he had stared too long, or if his thoughts had slipped somehow into hers. He didn’t even know if she could read minds, but she turned to look at him and smiled. It was a smile that spoke volumes. Their eyes locked, his breath caught in his throat, and that was all the encouragement he needed.
From that moment on they had taken every chance they could to get to know each other, in all senses of the word. It started with coffee and lunches, and as the relationship progressed it led to late night desserts and more. It hadn’t been easy, they were usually on assignments in opposite directions, but there was something between them, something that neither one of them could escape from.
Later he had transferred to Phoenix to be closer to her, although that’s not what the official request said. His move had been a good fit. It meant a change of partners for Ward, and that had been a positive. Ward and his partner had not been getting along. It hadn’t been a good fit in the beginning and it was getting worse. Gregg and Ward had not been seeing eye to eye for a quite a while and the jobs had been not been going well. The department had approved Ward’s transfer papers and moved him, silently thankful that Gregg stayed in Virginia.
He had been reassigned a partner in Phoenix, and it seemed to have worked for a while. It also gave him a chance to work with another friend that he had gone through training with. He had been stationed in Phoenix as well. The most important thing to Ward was Jan. It was when he had been reassigned that he got to know her more intimately as well. They even worked a few jobs together.
The more they were together the more they wanted to be. It was not only the fact that they had achieved the ability to freely roam through each other’s minds, communicating without words; they had connected even deeper. They became inseparable any day or night that they could afford to be together, but they didn’t allow anyone to know about it. Later, when the department learned of their growing involvement, they had surprisingly encouraged it, for a while. But it wasn’t long before they began to frown as they saw their control slowly slipping away. They were forbidden to see each other, and they complied, at least until the department thought that it was over.
After that, Jan and Ward met in secret. They never again worked together. He finally left the department under unfavorable conditions and officially charged with criminal activity. Even that didn’t stop them. At first Jan thought that maybe the charges were true; but as they continued to meet in secret she learned without a doubt that he was not guilty. She never really knew just what had happened until a couple of months ago when it had been necessary for her to learn about it. They had married in secret and now lived together in secret away from the department that they had been entrapped in. Deep in his thoughts, he never heard her come in. He never heard her move soundlessly across the room behind him.
She was skilled and he was distracted by his thoughts. She had seen his thoughts, carefully picking at them so that he would not detect her. Slowly she came up behind him and when her hands touched him, tracing the muscles in his back, he turned off the computer and stood up in one fluid movement unalarmed and totally aware of her now. His arm reached out to grab her. She ducked just as quickly, slipping away into the bedroom knowing that he would follow. With the information he wanted from the computer pushed aside; he walked toward the bedroom, removing his shirt in the process.
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Tuesday, October 3, 2017
Friday, May 5, 2017
Novel Ideas Part 9
Coming close to the end of this short story. What do you think should happen next?
Days later the number of people left in the program had
dwindled. Ward’s roommate was still in
the program, but things were getting harder. They were demanding more from each
person. Ward and Bobby drug themselves into the room long after the sun had
gone down. Whatever they had been having them do must have been working. Both Bobby
and Ward stopped short and turned to for the person that was sitting in the
dark in their room.
“Jack?” Ward spoke as Bobby walked over and turned on the
light. Jack and worked with them a number of times. He was already a trained
agent and had been invaluable with the basics. Over a short period of time he
had become a trusted associate and a good friend. Ward could feel that
something wasn’t right and it wasn’t just the look on his face or the droop of
his shoulders. It also didn’t go unnoticed that Bobby turned and flopped down
on his bunk in exhaustion. Jack glanced over at Bobby and then back at Ward.
“Can we,” and he nodded toward the door. Ward was exhausted
himself but something was troubling Jack and he couldn’t get it out of his
mind. If he was right in how he was reading his mind, a skill that was still so
new to him he didn’t want to trust it completely yet, it had something to do
with Jack’s progress in this training, and Bobby.
“Yeah, I could use some air myself,” and he turned, summoning
up energy he didn’t have, and walked out the door.
Thursday, April 27, 2017
Novel Ideas Part 8
It has been so good to get back to the writing. My mind has been going in all directions and needs a little focus. Hope you enjoy this:
They sat down in a rather plain room. Utilitarian table and
chairs were surrounded by gray walls. Not what Ward had expected after the last
go round. Pat sat on one side of the
table and pointed to the chair opposite her.
Since there was no reason not to sit, Ward did as he was asked. On the
table there was a stack of manila folders each filled with papers. Slowly she
picked a folder from the pile and handed it to him without saying a word. It
was a test, everything they did here was a test, so he waited with folded arms
for instructions.
“I want you to read what is in the file,” she opened it for
him.
“That all,” Ward knew it wasn’t.
“For now,” and she smiled, “Yes.”
Three hours later he had read through about four of the
files. No words had been spoken. Each time he had finished she had just handed
him another folder. Each folder contained a mission or job that had been
completed by one of the government agencies that tried to enforce the laws of
the land. Some of the jobs had ended with what some would call a happy ending
and the perpetrator going to jail. Some, most, were still open case files. All
of them had to do with domestic violence and murder. None of them had been redacted, making the
details all the more personal and horrific. When he closed the fourth file Pat
finally spoke.
“Well,” and she leaned back in the chair.
“You picked these cases especially for me to read,” and she
nodded slightly, “I also know that you have collected all the information you
want to know.” When she said nothing Ward continued, “You wanted to know my
reactions to these cases especially because of my mother’s death, but as you
have seen, although I find these cases horrific, as anyone would, I will not
let it affect my judgement or my feelings.”
“Some of our agents are put on cases like these,” she looked
him straight in the eyes as she spoke, “We need to know that you can do the job
no matter what you read.”
“You’ve been reading my mind from the moment you talked with
me in the cafeteria.” He pushed the file back toward her, “I know I can. All I
need to know from you right now is whether or not you think I’m good enough to
continue in this program of yours?”
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Wednesday, February 22, 2017
Novel Ideas - Part 4
It's been a bit long in the tooth here getting this out but hope you enjoy the next installment!
“It’s similar to the meditation we will be learning
this week, only there training will be more intense. I thought that this might get me through it,”
Jack hadn’t even looked at him yet, but had seemed to look through him.
“It’s been an amazing two weeks, I can’t imagine what
it will be like in six more,” Ward wasn’t what else to say.
“I probably won’t make it all the way through,” and
before Ward could say anymore Jack raised a hand, “That’s just fine, my
ancestors believe I’m here for another reason,” and with that he was
quiet. Ward sat there for a few minutes. He realized that the fire was less of a fire
and more like incense. Taking a deep
breath he focused on the scents coming from the sticks.
“Nice,” Ward couldn’t help it. He sighed as breathed
out and relaxed.
“It’s going to be a hard week for all of us, but for
some of us,” and Ward knew instinctually who Jack was talking about, “we will
see hell.”
“A little over the top don’t you think?” Ward couldn’t help himself as he closed his
eyes and took in the spicy sweet smell again.
It seemed to take away the stress, doubts, and draw out all of the fear
and tension as if expelling puss from a wound.
“You’re welcome to join me in the mornings and then
you can tell me if my statement was exaggerated on Friday,” and with that the
conversation was over.
By Thursday Ward was beginning to understand. They had sat in class after class, hour after
hour on how to meditate. Then they had been put in a room for increasing times
each day. He wished he could tell
someone what the room looked like inside, but he had been blindfolded on the
way in and then once the door was closed it was darker than the dark side of
the moon inside. Temperature was under
someone else’s control, as well as the conditions inside the room like fresh
air. After a few minutes to assess what
the situation was he came to the conclusion that this was some type of sensory
deprivation room. They were supposed to
put what they learned to work inside the room.
He had tried to sense to see if anyone was near at first and found
nothing and no one so he got busy meditating.
At first it was easy, then as the time in the dark room increased it got
harder. Today, tomorrow, and Saturday
there were no more classes. In fact, at
eight this morning they would be locked in what he now called the dark room to
six in the morning on Sunday. Ward was
beginning to think that this was also some sort of modified SERE military
training. It was no secret that if they
were able to read minds as promised, then the types of training they would need
would be endless. Today’s activities
were nothing more than separating those who could and those who couldn’t use
the meditation skills to survive. Better
they do this now than to get create a bunch of mind readers they couldn’t
use.
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Thursday, January 12, 2017
Novel Ideas - Part 2
I'd like to share the next part to the story that I found:
“Glad to see that you have arrived,” Ward turned to
face the door just before his roommate entered.
He was still getting used to the idea that these ‘sixth-senses’ as he called
them could be, and would be, developed further.
He still had is doubts about their motives he had spent most of his life
suspicious what others had wanted or told him.
The research they had showed him had been impressive, but then again
reality was always a downer. The man
that came in the door was about his age with his dark hair cut almost army
close with that All-American look in contrast to Ward’s brown hair and simple
cut. He was also about two inches taller
than Ward. His clothes showed that he
could and had afforded more than the three other men that had been with Ward in
the van.
“Nice to meet you,” and Ward trailed off as he
extended his hand. The other man’s grin
widened.
“Careful, they’ll like that,” and he shook Ward’s
hand, “Name’s Robert B. Malone, but most people call me Bobby.”
“Ward.”
“To answer your questions, I’ve only been here a
couple of days and yes they can deliver what they promise I believe,” Bobby’s
talents seemed to more advanced than Ward would have guessed. “By the way, no trick there. That’s what they brought us here to do
right? We are supposed to be able to
learn how to read other’s minds and thoughts.
There most intimate feelings and yet not be able to be caught at
it. We aren’t going to be just normal
spies, we will become super spies.”
“I take it you like to talk?” Ward turned and started to store his gear.
“Not really, but it looks as if you could use a
friend,” Bobby flopped down on his bed and stared at the ceiling gently move
with the wind. They didn’t have much
more time as the speakers went off and they were off to orientation and
training right away.
Wednesday, July 27, 2016
Stop! I'm Writing
Some days I have to wonder when I have time to write. Really, since it is a second career there are days that the world just conspires to keep me from writing. Today is one of those ... Or should I say it was a few of those days now. I started this blog a few days ago. Since then I have helped pack and move one of my children across the country to start out on his new adventures in work and college. I am also helping the other on move from one college house share to another. Not a happy move at that. So now you can see that writing has taken the back seat to all the rest of the worlds troubles. As the dust begins to settle, if only for a moment, I can get back to rambling on here. Writers do a lot of there work at home and in-between life's moments. How do you handle the unexpected interruption?
Saturday, January 16, 2016
Something New in the Publishing World
For all those interested in new ways to publish Kindle has done it! It is called Kindle Scout. Once submitted your book is then previewed (just the first chapter or so) by other Kindle readers who can then nominate your book for Kindle to publish. If you book comes out on top they then pay you an advance and give you a contract. The best of both worlds!!! If you want to know more check out my book and while you are there if you want to leave a nomination that would be great!
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